Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 5 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 27 October 2020
hopeful
this is my r.e it is about a kid who went to jail got rescued and rescued other kids like him so he wanted to become a lawyer. heres the link if you want it. what do you want to become in the futer?
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Kia Ora Lochy! I'm Izzy from Rawhiti School.
ReplyDeleteI love this story and the plotline! Check your capitals in the future.
What happens after??